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Behind locked eyes
Lies a lonely soul
Facade of sadness
Awaits the key

Rainbow of dreams
Long for flight
Hidden love
Beneath steel skin

Barbed wired walls
Surround my emotions
A barricaded heat
Yearns endlessly

Pass key to my heart
Free me
Release the love
If you're the one
Then you shall be
Unlock the cellar
The door to me
I'll give you my heart
If you're the key
Black Rose A Poem written by my ex husband Frankie.This is a poem he had wrote from his past experiences.

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PaMonk Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Professional Artist
This is So beautiful Melissa, I did not know you done Poem's I love Poems
I will have to go and look at these all thank you for sharing them this is One so Touching.:hug:
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016
:aww: Barbara those poems were written by my ex husband.... He wrote some for me that are in the folder. I wish I know how to write like that. I am glad you like it my friend. Thank you so much
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PaMonk Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Professional Artist
Most welcome they are very nice I just love poems
that was so nice of him to write them.:D 
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016
Oh God he wrote over 200 just for me in total I do not know how many hundreds he wrote. I like poems too :aww:
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PaMonk Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Professional Artist
Omg! I think all i ever got was Just old letters asking me to come home Lol
you are Lucky.:heart:
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016
:aww: Yes it is nice to have someone love you like that but not one that is possessive. 
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PaMonk Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Professional Artist
Yes this is very true had one of them Once, that was my Oldest daughters father he was bad at it but then he was mean also
and like to hit a lot also, we never got along at all.
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2016
Oh my dad was like that too always a belt in hand
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Your poems are absolutely beautiful!
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2016
I didn't write them but do appreciate your comment :huggle: they were written my by ex husband. 
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Sorry, Melissa I will try and remember this in the future! Still it's good reading. Huggle! 
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016
Oh please do not worry a lot of people do this. :hug:
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
:hug:
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StevenLSheppard Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015
I like the idea he has here with the key.

"If your the one"
"If you're the one"

"If your the key"
"If you're the key"

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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015
Yes this one was nice :blackrose: Ty Steven
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can't help be curious - what happened to you and Frankie?
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014
He was too jealous and much to possessive I couldn't handle it so my love eventually died for him.
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww... Just wondered.  Your keeping of his poetry and posting of them would seem to indicate otherwise. :)
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014
That's okay. We have remained friends in spite of it all he wrote about 200 poems just for me.
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analovecatdog Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
Excellent dear sister well written.love the eyes photo hugs
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
Give rose  Thank you so much my lovely sister I am very happy you like the poem.Love you sister Ana
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome poetry , always a treat to read his writing More... by isider
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
Awww thank you dearest one you are also an excellent writer too.I like the pretty colorful heart emote :huggle:
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcomed dearest and thank you I have not written much lately :) the emote is made by my dear isider :iconisider: Hearts In Colour by isider  
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
I know it seems you have sort of got out of that cycle.What is important is that you are doing something you enjoy
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think it is all the art I have creating that pushed me away from all the sorrow :) been too busy to do anything else , lol .
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
some people do things like this to get their mind off their own personal problems in life
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Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes and it is a good way , better than hurting yourself or others
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xmilek Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
Exquisite poetry ... wordplay is amazing ... thank you that you gave us the opportunity to look into his soul ... 
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
Girl with Bow and FlowerThank you kindly my dearest friend such a lovely comment for an excellent observation of the words in this poem.I am always very overwhelmed and appreciative of your support.
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xmilek Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
You're very welcome dear Melissa, I look forward to another beautiful poetry :rose:
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
Hug me Thank you so much dearest friend I do not put them out often but I do appreciate it so much  
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xmilek Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
My pleasure my friend :huggle:
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Bitch0nline Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
   Writing emoticon Totally awesome poetry .Always enjoy reading your ex's writings  I love the eyes they are really different.
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Thank you so much dear Ann. Rose 
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youlittlemonkey Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Frankie writes with such feelings Melissa thank you for sharing this sis :hug:
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Thank you sister I appreciate your comment. Love you sister :glomps: 
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youlittlemonkey Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
You are welcome sis, love you too:hug:
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LuLupoo Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Red Hearts- Free to use This poem that Frankie wrote was beautifully written Melissa. He has such talent when it came to writing. That image you picked went very well with it. He always put a lot of emotion into his writings. Thank you for sharing it on here for all to see it. :hug:
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
 :HugTrain: Thank you so much Lulu always look forward to your very lovely comments and observation of his work.When I saw the eyes I felt they were really unique so I had to have them.Love you so much sister :heart:
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Nestharon Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014   Writer
Beautiful, emotional and yet inspiring. Your ex is really good with words...
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
  rose Thank you so much I certainly appreciate your very lovely comment and always welcome such wonderful feedback!
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Nestharon Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014   Writer
You are very welcome. I like to read, it helps me as well, to understand more things about life :)
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
I am glad to hear that :huggle:
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CarlosAE Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm...very fascinating! Great poetry. :)
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
:huggle: Thank you Carlos I enjoy hearing that
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CarlosAE Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! ^^
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Lethal-Woman Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
 redblack 1  Melissa I think most writers deal with their many feelings about life in their writings Your Ex must of been a very sensitive man and he really had the ability to allow his feelings the flow so easily on paper.I think that is a real gift.Thank you for sharing yet another one of his poems.I have to say that the image of the eyes is very unique.Excellent find
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Lust0fADeeperPain Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Yes this is true Lana he was that kind of person always filled with so much emotion.He would even get teary eyed lots of times when he would express his love for me.He was very gifted.And I Always appreciated his writings and his work.This is why I shared them with my friends.Thank you for commenting I appreciate it
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Lethal-Woman Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Too bad things did not work out for the two of you...they just don't make men like that anymore.Always enjoy reading his writings.So ty for sharing it
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